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Pearlty | Velvety mystifying dispelling spurging's of faithTime well spent as sleeping embers dissolve within love's uplifting embrace. "It is an ancient story Yet is ever new" ~Heine |
Randall | Missed this the first time. Loves it! |
mirage29 | A spurge is a noxious toxic weed or shrub, with a bitter milky juice that has purgative properties. http://www.thefreedictionary.com/spurge How do you relate your thoughts to this poem here, my Pearlty? |
Pearlty | Hi Mirage, I think as the definition states "purging" is the key word. I feel the poem at the time reflected out with the old, and in with the new towards more positive-kind feelings and thinking. Encouraging the natural order..letting things flow.
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mirage29 | That's great! |
thequeen | Living, Is something, But love uplifts and brings everything to faces, Embers, Disappear and snow melts in water, In the embrace of love, We must be patient, Isn't this the message?? |
Pearlty | Yes Queen, that's a wonderfully insightful description of the message felt when I wrote this. Many little short thoughts/poems like this one, often are simply when I wake up I scribble something in my journal, whether those first thoughts of the morning are remnants from dream, or deriving from the day before, or happenings toward the day to come. |
mirage29 | ^ That's a nice writing tip, Pearlty! |
Pearlty | Re-reading your above message interp. queen, that's a poem in itself! Thanks Mirage and weekend |
Ayelet | Uplifting as awakening. Sleeping embers awakened to be dissolved, awakened to a higher state of self, where fire has another face. This is how I feel the words. |
thequeen | quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Re-reading your above message interp. queen, that's a poem in itself! Thanks Mirage and weekend
Your insight made me restructure the interpretation to make it look like a poem.. You truly must have someone inspiring in your life to make you write so beautifully .. |
Pearlty | Ayelet, you felt the words perfectly! queen, your restructure was beautiful, it's magical when poems have a way of making the trickle effect happen towards greater meaning. As for inspiration, I've been lucky but more than that- I've been thankful.
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Randall | quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Uplifting as awakening. Sleeping embers awakened to be dissolved, awakened to a higher state of self, where fire has another face. This is how I feel the words.
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mirage29 | quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Uplifting as awakening. Sleeping embers awakened to be dissolved, awakened to a higher state of self, where fire has another face. This is how I feel the words.
That's really Beautiful, Ayelet! |