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Topic: Lonesome Feeling
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 209 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted February 14, 2016 09:34 PM
Lonely This past months where I had nothing But this lonesome feeling Broken In many pieces like a porcelain doll And I can't feel the rock n' roll Forsaken Like a child in the streets longing For a love that isn't happening Dancing A futile melody with a maid Hoping her charms will get me laid Living Dreams of fortune and fame And pretending joy while being in painTenderness It's what I've been looking To ease this lonesome feeling Crying Tears of sorrow in the midnight It's something I can't fight Waiting For the maker to heal me soon On this night of the crescent moon Hoping I'll forget all her manners and charms And all our wasted dreams Making Novels about creeps and loners Trying to be kind lovers It is a heaven but it's a prison Where I can't show a thing The whole world is mine Friends said "You'll be fine" Drink this old French wine And enjoy the ride Woman I’ve had this creeping feeling You’ll do me wrong Broken By a wild twist of fate And I still can’t think straight Thinking What can I try to do? To forget everything about you Knowing That I’ll see you once again And I have to try to stay sane Believing That I can handle your loveliness In the sea of madness Gotta shake this lonesome feeling Somehow, anyhow Gotta shake this lonesome feeling Please show me how
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4958 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted February 15, 2016 02:57 PM
Found this video and song... The artist is saying the same thing. Excellent work, LF_DX -- on the inside of you, and in your verses. (music) Let It Be (by Labrinth, 2014; great vid) [3:15] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xwGERoFtQoM IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 62277 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 16, 2016 09:46 AM
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2392 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted February 16, 2016 10:01 AM
Beautiful ..
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1306 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted February 17, 2016 07:28 AM
Melodious, yearning, beautiful!IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1278 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted February 18, 2016 12:23 PM
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