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Topic: A Secret Between Us
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1070 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 18, 2015 12:13 PM
A Secret Between UsIs happiness all it seems? Can you love without hiding some of the most precious emotions away? Or may they be the least precious of all, but yours. I recognise some of your features, they guide me through the dark wave of still emotion, trying to hide me unsuccessfully under the wing of the great bird, the mother of all of us helpless creatures, surviving the flight of imagination over the very real earth, hover above secrets between us, lying to our faces about separation and despair, wanting us to pull the blanket of sheer winter above our heads, escaping senseless impressions which are bound to drown us one day And then we are gone inside the togetherness of all creatures, helpless as they may seem. The womb is echoing, calling out one name to make believe.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4119 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 18, 2015 02:41 PM
Wow!!!! {{{{ }}}} I feel you. So good with your words and images at describing the energy.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1106 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 18, 2015 04:25 PM
This certainly is one lovely poem to read through and resonate with Ayelet. Very nice! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1070 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 18, 2015 11:32 PM
Thanks Mirage and Pearlty! I guess this one is easier to resonate with IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 1480 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted September 19, 2015 01:08 PM
Which name is the womb calling out. It was a very torrid but calm let out of human emotion. Beautiful.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1070 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 20, 2015 05:08 PM
Thank you thequeen IP: Logged |
LeeLoo2014 Knowflake Posts: 16083 From: Venus cornering Neptune Registered: Mar 2014
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posted September 20, 2015 05:25 PM
Very nice! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1070 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 20, 2015 06:13 PM
Thanks LeeLoo, you once gave me a reading.. nice to see you here.IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 89 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted September 20, 2015 09:34 PM
This is pretty good, it's very powerful.IP: Logged |
LeeLoo2014 Knowflake Posts: 16083 From: Venus cornering Neptune Registered: Mar 2014
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posted September 22, 2015 09:10 AM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Thanks LeeLoo, you once gave me a reading.. nice to see you here.
Awww thank you for the welcome! I hope the reading was good and came true, or, if bad, that it didn't ------------------ I seem to have loved you in numberless forms... AstroMandala New Profiles IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1070 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted September 22, 2015 04:19 PM
Thank you LF DX!You're welcome, LeeLoo! The reading was good, but I don't know yet if it would come true... I hope it will. Thanks for the effort, anyhow IP: Logged |