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Topic: Mould A Ring
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2368 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted February 09, 2016 11:29 AM
Carving a symphony in the hazy fog, I mutely sing and colourfully snog, You are here my angel I distantly hold, The pining deserved and gestures bold, Your fragrance divine melts my heart, Our piousness crawls my pining starts, However you hide playing games with me, Pulsating my agony in your fluttering glee, The foggy coat of air appears again, Oh I love you more the more it rains, I will love you let the glory imbibe, In my pleasant heart the motion naive, Hearing you again I will tenderly sing, With my love I will mould a ring.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1276 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted February 10, 2016 09:10 AM
I love the variety of words you've chosen thequeen, they form,blend, and flow so perfectly together, and the body of this is sweetly and tenderly stated.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4943 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted February 10, 2016 12:03 PM
quote: Oh I love you more the more it rains, I will love you let the glory imbibe, In my pleasant heart the motion naive, Hearing you again I will tenderly sing,In my pleasant Heart... IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1303 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted February 10, 2016 09:09 PM
You are carving a love poem in the mist. Very delicate.IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2368 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted February 15, 2016 11:53 AM
Thank you for reading Pearlty, mirage and Ayelet IP: Logged | |