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From: the pineapple under the sea
Registered: Aug 2011

posted July 23, 2012 12:15 PM            

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I thought I'd share this poem I made which I never ever found again until I cleaned my room today. LOL It was a poem I wrote when I was in a moment of confusion not knowing whether I should confess my feelings to my guy friend or not. I've wrote a lot of other poems but this one meant a lot to me. I didn't used big words here but I hope you guys will like it

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All that we can be.

With every moment I spend with you
I can't help to wonder
If you ever like me too.

Sometimes I ask myself
Where I really stand in your life.
Are we more than friends?
Or am I just waisting my time?

Should I tell you what I feel?
Will you take your time to listen?
I know I'm taking the risk
Of our friendship being broken.

And if telling the truth
Will keep us apart,
Then I'll never say I love you
And will rather hide my heart.

But what else can I do
To make you notice me?
There's so many girls out there
Way prettier than me.

And I hope you'll realize
I'm not strong enough.
Behind my happy disguise
Is a girl broken in love.

I wish you'll notice me somehow
But not a chance, I see.
We're best friends, I know,
But is that all we can be?

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From: Venus next to Randall
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posted July 24, 2012 06:36 AM            

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Did you ever tell him?

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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.

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From: the pineapple under the sea
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posted July 24, 2012 10:12 AM            

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nope.. but I wish I did

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posted July 24, 2012 06:39 PM            

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Sad but lovely!

And how perfect for you to find that during Merc Rx.

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"The snake which cannot cast its skin has to die. As well the minds which are prevented from changing their opinions; they cease to be mind." --- Friedrich Nietzsche

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From: the pineapple under the sea
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posted July 25, 2012 12:08 AM            

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Originally posted by Alma Sun:
Sad but lovely!

And how perfect for you to find that during Merc Rx.

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oh true!! is this like a sign or something? haha I always like looking for signs

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
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posted July 26, 2012 08:34 AM            

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: the pineapple under the sea
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posted July 26, 2012 11:47 AM            

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i was too 'into' him that I actually started to write poems about him..oh young love

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posted July 27, 2012 10:47 AM            

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Love (and loss of it) is the stuff great poems are made of.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted July 28, 2012 12:51 PM            

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I wrote my best stuff when heartbroken.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted December 03, 2012 08:55 AM            

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*bump*

wow heartstrings! that poem right there, explains exactly what i'm feeling for my best guy friend! I don't know either whether i should keep this feelings to myself or ask him where i stand :S Looks like we're on the same boat aren't we?

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posted December 03, 2012 10:06 AM            

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I have a poem that I wrote when I was in Gr 7. That was the only poem I wrote, most of them were copied off for homework. LOLOLOL

I wonder Poem

By:Me x3

As I sit under a tree
Bored out of my mind
I wonder
I wonder what you're doing
I wonder what you're thinking about
I wonder if you think of me

I wonder if you know
Your on my mind
No matter what I do
I always think of you
I wonder if you care
I wonder will you ever
I wonder will you ever
I wonder how long this will last
I wonder if you know, I love you
Oh, I could wonder forever
I wonder...

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