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Topic: For Those Fallen
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proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 04:06 PM
i thank You God for most this amazing day:for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky; and for everything which is natural which is infinite which is yes (i who have died am alive again today, and this is the sun's birthday; this is the birth day of life and of love and wings: and of the gay great happening illimitably earth) how should tasting touching hearing seeing breathing any-lifted from the no of all nothing-human merely being doubt unimaginable You? (now the ears of my ears awake and now the eyes of my eyes are opened)--------------------------------- may my heart always be open to little birds who are the secrets of living what ever they sing is better than to know and if men should not hear them men are old may my mind stroll about hungry and fearless and thirsty and supple and even if it's sunday may i be wrong for whenever men are right they are not young and may my self do nothing usefully and love yourself so more than truly there's never been quite such a fool who could fail pulling all the sky over him with one smile -e.e. cummings (Work through, read thoroughly, repeat if necessary)...I double dog dare you to read it aloud. P.S. It took real restraint not to post Housman's "When I Was One- and- Twenty" ------------------ We will not cease from exploration And the end of all our exploring Will be to arrive where we started And to know the place for the first time. -T.S. Eliot IP: Logged |
pearly Knowflake Posts: 554 From: Neptune, Milky Way, Universe Registered: Jun 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 05:11 PM
Love it Proxie... thanks! Oh, and POST the other one! IP: Logged |
proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 05:12 PM
Oh, you don't want me to; it's depressing. I will post this, though (thanks given to 2 most excellent professors): Drive a nail home and clinch it so faithfully that you can wake up in the night and think of your work with satisfaction, a work at which you would not be ashamed to invoke the Muse. - Henry David Thoreau, Walden IP: Logged |
juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 05:46 PM
Do post it Proxie; I love it & I`m too lazy to go hunting for it... come on... you made me want it juniperb PS it must be in the air. I`ve been thinking about E.A.Poe & 'Annabell Lee' my favorite poem by him. IP: Logged |
proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 05:58 PM
Ohhhkkay:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When I Was One- and- Twenty WHEN I was one-and-twenty I heard a wise man say, ‘Give crowns and pounds and guineas But not your heart away; Give pearls away and rubies But keep your fancy free.’ But I was one-and-twenty, No use to talk to me. When I was one-and-twenty I heard him say again, ‘The heart out of the bosom Was never given in vain; ’Tis paid with sighs a plenty And sold for endless rue.’ And I am two-and-twenty, And oh, ’tis true, ’tis true. - A.E. Housman ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And another by e.e. (the dashes and such are to keep the spacing), for me, honoring Spring: O sweet spontaneous earth how often have the doting - - ______fingers of prurient philosophies pinched and poked - - thee has the naughty thumb of science prodded thy - - ______beauty_______how often have religions taken thee upon their scraggy knees squeezing and - - buffeting thee that thou mightest conceive gods ______but true - - to the incomparable couch of death thy rhythmic lover - - ______thou answerest - - them only with - - ______spring - e.e. cummings
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juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 06:05 PM
Thanks Proxieme! I couldn`t resist & posted Poe on 'For Yellow Wax and the Ants'
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proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 09, 2003 06:16 PM
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trillian Moderator Posts: 1317 From: The Boundless Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 09, 2003 07:12 PM
proxieme, you're way cool! I used to love e.e. cummings, haven't read him for years, but I remember in HS doing a paper on his stuff. Here's another one by him, hope you don't mind!PITY THIS BUSY MONSTER, MANUNKIND pity this busy monster, man unkind not. Progress is a comfortable disease: your victim (death and life safely beyond) plays with the bigness of his littleness -electrons deify one razorblade into a mountainrange;lenses extend unwish through curving wherewhen till unwish returns on itself. A world of made is not a world of born-pity poor flesh and trees, poor stars and stones, but never this find specimen of hypermagical ultraomnipotence. We doctors know a hopeless case if--listen: there's a hell of a good universe next door;let's go e.e. cummings That was kinda heavy, so I'll leave you with one more:
THE OCTOPUS Tell me, O Octopus, I begs, Is those things arms, or is they legs? I marvel at thee, Octopus; If I were thou, I'd call me Us. --Ogden Nash Funny, I was thinking about a favorite poem yesterday, "Funeral Blues" by W.H. Auden, but it's kind of a downer, so unless y'all really want to read it I won't post it! IP: Logged |
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posted May 09, 2003 09:04 PM
"Eyes betray the soul and bear it's thinking. Beyond words they say so many things to me. A stranger here reborn it seems awaking wonders deep in me. If nothing's ventured nothing's gained so I must seize the day.And fighting time so hard I pray that this moment lasts forever. And will the world stay standing still at least for me. Through my eyes stare into me. I bear my heart for all to see. With my face turned to the sun there ever standing still. It wasn't you it wasn't me it wasn't anyone. It was a day so long awaited and a chance to be as me. I let the wind run through my hands as I turned to walk away. In distant days I long to sense it all so clear. And fighting time so hard I pray that this moment lasts forever. And will the world stay standing still at least for me. Through my eyes stare into me. I bear my heart for all to see. With my face turned to the sun there ever standing still. And fighting time so much I ask. I will this morning last forever. Though seasons change and things come to pass remain inside of me. And fighting time so hard I pray that this moment lasts forever. and will the world stay standing still at least for me. I had no faith before that day in any vow or deed. Days followed days and years were meaningless. Despite the wisdom of defeat I bore my heart for all to see the wonders I'd seen. "
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proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 10, 2003 12:28 AM
Yep I posted the 1st two b/c I can not read them aloud w/o a smile flashing my face and tears welling in my eyes.Tril - that funny that you should mention "Funeral Blues" - I was just reading that today. God, what mighty words - I imagine them being yelled from a true-love's funeral pulpit. Post it, though - as I said, it's powerful. You should prolly put a wee "this is not a happy poem" disclaimer b/f it, though N_w - That's beautiful...where's it from? You OK, dubya? IP: Logged |
Lunargirl Knowflake Posts: 1513 From: south of utopia Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 10, 2003 01:23 AM
Here's a fave of mine, called "Like Musical Instruments".~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like musical instruments Abandoned in a field The parts of your feelings Are starting to know a quiet The pure conversion of your Life into art seems destined Never to occur You don't mind You feel spiritual and alert As the air must feel Turning into sky aloft and blue You feel like You'll never feel like touching anything or anyone Again And then you do - Tom Clark (1941 - )
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trillian Moderator Posts: 1317 From: The Boundless Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 10, 2003 11:08 AM
What a beautiful poem, Lunargirl...I'm enjoying all of these so much! OK, here goes, gonna post this amazing poem, but ..... *WARNING*WARNING*WARNING*WARNING* The following is a beautiful heartfelt poem, but it is NOT uplifting...please skip it if you're feeling a little blue yourself. Funeral Blues
Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead, Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last for ever; I was wrong. The stars are not wanted now: put out every one; Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun; Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood, For nothing now can ever come to any good. W. H. Auden It's been raining here for days, with amazing thunder and lightening displays...weather like this makes me pensive, though I'm not depressed! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 10, 2003 11:17 AM
May I move this to our poetry Forum? ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
proxieme Knowflake Posts: 3193 From: Southern 'Bama Registered: Aug 2002
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posted May 10, 2003 12:18 PM
You certainly may I didn't think that it would spiral like this.IP: Logged |
Lunargirl Knowflake Posts: 1513 From: south of utopia Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 10, 2003 01:45 PM
Oh - I thought the Lindaland Poetry forum was for Knowflakes' original poems -- it's other poetry too?Lunargirl IP: Logged |
trillian Moderator Posts: 1317 From: The Boundless Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 10, 2003 01:58 PM
There's a poetry forum? I for one don't mind if it's moved,it's really proxieme's thread... but I guess I haven't found the forum yet...I'll be in search! IP: Logged |
juniperb Moderator Posts: 3936 From: www.Heaven.Home Registered: Mar 2002
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posted May 10, 2003 02:46 PM
Trillian, For Yellow Wax and the Ants forum IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 10, 2003 05:26 PM
Doesn't have to be original, though that's the primary idea. Just as long as the author is credited. Poetry can even be placed in Soul Unions if about Love and romance. Song lyrics could go in any of the three. We are very flexible here! ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |