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posted September 28, 2005 09:30 AM         

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I posted this elsewhere..but I think it really belongs here.

Lialei/Lialeigh

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posted September 28, 2005 04:11 PM         

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The poetry is wonderful fayte.....you are a poet.....a wonderful one......

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posted September 28, 2005 07:24 PM         

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Sue g
Thank you!
I was just a little kid then.....
My poetry was heartfelt though.
Now my poetry is much weirder!

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posted September 28, 2005 09:41 PM         

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It has the distinct flavor of Edgar Allen Poe`s Annabel Lee. Don`t you just love him ?

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posted September 29, 2005 12:46 AM         

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Thank you!
I do love Poe!
I never noticed that before...
You said:
distinct flavor of Edgar Allen Poe`s Annabel Lee

WOW! Thank you! Poe is much better!
But I see how the sea and lost love and angst
is "flavor of! I had to go Google it to see what you meant!
Thank you!

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posted September 29, 2005 08:58 AM         

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Fayte, this is beautiful. I'm confused, though. What does this mean?

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From "Adam T.R.Foster"
past life name of Fayte.m

Now remember...I was only 12 going on 13 then! When this came to me!
Forgive the poetry.

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posted September 29, 2005 10:46 AM         

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posted September 29, 2005 12:56 PM         

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Thanks for sharing, fayte! Beautiful work! I have also written from a male point of view. I have to discover my male name.

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posted September 29, 2005 01:16 PM         

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Bluemoon!

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posted September 30, 2005 09:49 AM         

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posted September 30, 2005 02:12 PM         

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posted September 30, 2005 03:58 PM         

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To all those for whom love and passion transcends time and gender and heartbreak and adversity!

Love
Fayte

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posted September 30, 2005 04:36 PM         

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Oh fayte I would love that poster....where could I get it from ......it is so ........ me.......
xxx

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posted September 30, 2005 05:08 PM         

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Sue g!
http://www.allposters.com/-sp/Lovers-1895_i368456_.htm
http://www.interesting.com/

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posted September 30, 2005 05:13 PM         

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Oh thanks Fayte....you are so very kind......I appreciate your help......xxxxx

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posted October 01, 2005 10:48 PM         

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ah yes, Poe is better and I presume thats why he wrote "The Black Cat" and "The Raven" as well. Practise, practise, practise and infamey may be yours

Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
`Sir,' said I, `or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
That I scarce was sure I heard you' - here I opened wide the door; -
Darkness there, and nothing more.

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posted October 02, 2005 01:47 AM         

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Hey..I was 12 going on 13!
Just a kid!
Maybe I should not have posted it.
Or rewrote it in a more adult and more refined manner!
But...that is how I wrote it after I had the dreams that 38 years ago...so I felt that was how it should be presented.
Oh well.....
But I do love Poe.
Infamy?
That is funny!

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posted October 02, 2005 02:39 PM         

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Oh Fayte, dont be so overjudgemental in this work !

If you hadnt metnioned it, I wouldnt have known you where only a child when you wrote this. Realy now, it doesnt look like the work of a 12 year old girl.

Fine as is my freind.

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posted October 02, 2005 03:00 PM         

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Magus!
Thank You!

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posted October 02, 2005 03:50 PM         

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I call first dibs on the messianic label!!!!

(just kidding, fayte. trying to make you laugh. )

that's a sad poem. Being as you remember the man's name, have you ever done a little historical snooping to see what you could find?

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posted October 02, 2005 07:42 PM         

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Thanks TINK!
The fact that you CAN truly laugh makes you A-OK!
Thank you!

Some...but not much. Been researching farther back ones with people physically in my life.
Thanks again!

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posted October 04, 2005 02:29 AM         

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It was beautifully meant to stay in that moment in time, I believe, Fayte. The poem from the moment, just as it was all reTurning back to you.

Funny...I came across this poem tonight. I wrote it a few years back, but feel like it might have a place here. (?)

Darling,
I've waited for you
for a thousand years
In this dull, polished amber,
held back the tears

The highways eclipsed me
The meadows grew far
Time, a bereaved
brethren of afar

How I pace back the miles
retrace every step,
all the while
the sacred memory
of your soul,
held warm against my heart.

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posted October 04, 2005 11:03 AM         

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Lialei
One thing I have always loved...
Amber...set in rings...amber perfume,incense...the sunsets with the ambered lights...especially over water or the amber light shining upon the hair of a beloved one. Or ambered embered firelight!
Thank you!
The sound and feeling of waiting and loneliness soul deep shows in your lovely poem!

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posted October 05, 2005 10:05 AM         

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Oh, yes, I understand that longing, Fayte
All of my life, I've had this feeling of wandering lost with this knowing of what such Love feels like, but never find it again in this restricting reality here...only in the realms of my sacred memories within or until I return to the realms beyond the sky where it is possible.
I know everyone probably feels this way to an extent...but it is extrememly strong in me.
This poem just came to me, for no one in particular, as if I were writing it to a beloved of long ago that I missed terribly in this life. The feeling of sadness and an unexplainable yearning....

Funny you should mention the amber. I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me, because I could swear you mentioned amber in your poem...just a strong feeling. When I read it, then I saw it was 'ember'. I had remembered it as~ 'amber of hope'.

hmmm...strong feelings you have rekindled lately, Lovely Fiery Lady.

Love to You!

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posted October 05, 2005 11:14 AM         

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Lia!

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