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whiterabbit
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Posts: 954
From: Cabbagetown
Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 22, 2005 10:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message
blame it on the grimy rain,
it stained the white flowers left on the porch,
soaked through the envelope and the running ink read
"you are inconsequential" instead of
whatever he meant to leave

blame it on the sullen rain
it brought me down from sailing the happy seas,
left with a classy frown and two cups of rich tea
I was looking for poetry to read aloud
but the echo frightened me,
ill eggshell wall colour left me uninspired

blame it on the deceiver/rain
where the skies should be Northern silver
they are gypsy black and no leaves
stuck on my shoes, only wet
and the scarf is too much,
but the winds too cold

blame it on the fickle rain
what vivid songs and thoughts
danced lascivious tangoes through my mind
and washed my strained and broken thoughts
clean, left delicious whiteness,
but the sneaky rain came and went

I blame it on the callous rain
it's not warm misty romance weather
when the drops blow to and fro with no grace
and umbrella cover does little for these pygmy hurricanes
and nobody, not anyone can hum sweetly with wet socks.

(just wrote this after a stroll in the mad rain attacking outside)

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lotusheartone
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Posts: 2123
From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005

posted October 22, 2005 10:48 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for lotusheartone     Edit/Delete Message
You have to love the rain for that

that was beautiful
thanks for sharing

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pixelpixie
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Posts: 1947
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted October 22, 2005 11:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
YOU rock my world, lady!

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future_uncertain
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Posts: 1637
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 24, 2005 08:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
frickin' awesome as always!

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whiterabbit
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Posts: 954
From: Cabbagetown
Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 24, 2005 11:50 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message

thanks. *sigh*
I'm feeling bluey rainey again...

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