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Topic: Autumnal Sights
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Pearlty
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posted September 18, 2015 04:37 PM
  
Aloft shades of umber
embow earthy forests
beneath clustered tree topsIdyllic vicissitudes
becloud and shadow
as golden rods play
hide and seek
above prismatic dregs Lush new and ancient growth
seen tapering away
drawn inward for rest
by the last austral rays Sensory contractions
descry nature's cues
while ablaze melds of color
display autumnal views. *one of my favorite seasons to poem about 
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Faith
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posted September 18, 2015 05:04 PM
So pretty. Makes me happy to read it... IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted September 18, 2015 05:52 PM
Glad for happiness, thanks Faith. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted September 18, 2015 11:19 PM
It is a beautiful poem. Very rich and colourful. And autumn hasn't arrived here yet.
Why or how do sensory contractions descry nature's cues? Is it a metaphore to giving birth? To senses whose sensitivity is so hightened so the cues of nature are lost on them? Forgive me for the questions. It was very pleasant to read, I just like to make sure I understood it all...  , though that may never really happen in a poem, because of the different layers...
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mirage29
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posted September 19, 2015 12:18 AM
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thequeen
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posted September 19, 2015 01:02 PM
This was so pleasant to read. I could feel I was standing near a pond where chills shook my body and I beheld the serene advent of Autumn. It's like a treasure box in complex words when unveiled brings laurels at view IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted September 20, 2015 11:38 AM
Thanks all! In answer to your question Ayelet, I was thinking about Nature's order of things. Timing and so forth. IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted September 06, 2018 08:59 PM
Bump for Autumn and looking forward to-
.. been a long hard working summer hereIP: Logged |
Randall
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posted September 07, 2018 05:34 PM
Hear, hear!IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted September 10, 2018 01:37 PM
 I've been thinking about you a lot in the past few weeks. Hope everything is good?Good Luck with in-coming waters from Hurricane Florence, to hit North Carolina on Thursday 9/14, right now at CatForce winds of 4!!!!  YIKES??!!! I know some people think, oh, that's too far away?? But I know differently!!!  Let us know how things go...
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Pearlty
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posted September 11, 2018 07:32 AM
Hi Mirage,
Everything is good thanks for asking and thinking of me. Yes definitely looks like quite a hurricane is approaching. My parents thankfully are back here in Ohio. Prayers for all it affects though. Although it’s a somber day 9/11
Enjoy the rest of the week, will catch up more via email soon.. IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted September 11, 2018 08:59 AM
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Randall
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posted September 12, 2018 12:35 PM
The hurricane hits tomorrow. Hopefully, everyone will have evacuated.IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted October 20, 2018 12:21 PM
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Pearlty
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posted October 20, 2018 12:52 PM
* my Autumn poems.. all kind of sound alike.. as I feel the same each year & love the Autumn season. Glad something comes into mind though- these busy days Peaceful rendition of life betides
as summer’s scape tenors away Renewal brings form, emergent with color
familiar and fervent like love’s taction The natural onset a bewildering vision
birth not a month, but rather a season An embrace, never too late or hasty
existing between warm and cold Contentment sprays radiants of scarlett and gold
prelude to a beautiful moment caught in soul.. IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted December 05, 2018 04:57 PM
quote:
Originally posted by Pearlty:
* my Autumn poems.. all kind of sound alike.. as I feel the same each year & love the Autumn season. Glad something comes into mind though- these busy days Peaceful rendition of life betides
as summer’s scape tenors away Renewal brings form, emergent with color
familiar and fervent like love’s taction The natural onset a bewildering vision
birth not a month, but rather a season An embrace, never too late or hasty
existing between warm and cold Contentment sprays radiants of scarlett and gold
prelude to a beautiful moment caught in soul..
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mirage29
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posted December 05, 2018 07:45 PM
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Ayelet
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posted December 06, 2018 11:11 AM
Hi Pearlty, I read it only now... I still need to find some of the words, but I really loved how the description is tender and flowing... your writing is very gentle, and beautiful.IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted December 09, 2018 11:29 AM
Thanks ayelet IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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posted September 08, 2019 02:45 PM
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Amonuet
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posted September 10, 2019 02:36 PM
So beautiful! Your writing is as lovely as ever. IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted October 06, 2019 12:42 PM
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mirage29
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posted October 10, 2019 02:03 PM
quote:
Originally posted by mirage29:
Linking your Autumn writings together!
- http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/002923.html Covering the years 2015,
consecutively through now.
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Randall
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posted October 26, 2019 12:32 PM
That time of year again.IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted December 12, 2019 05:52 PM
Fall has arrived!IP: Logged |
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