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posted June 08, 2020 02:36 PM            

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My heart had never known what Love was all
about
You taught it, set it free...
lit the spark
I will Love you till the last star in the sky
burns out
And then I will Love you
in the dark.

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posted June 08, 2020 04:43 PM            

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Beautiful!

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{added Title to your Index of Poems}
Will continue to do so,
as long as I'm a member of LL.

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posted June 08, 2020 05:23 PM            

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Thank you, mirage. Your opinion means the world to me, so that is my highest honor. It meant so much.

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posted June 09, 2020 12:28 PM            

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Thank you for adding it.

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posted June 09, 2020 05:04 PM            

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wow, omg .. well thank you very much

You do good poetry.
Even with your other works, you're very sensitive.

Linda would love it.

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posted June 09, 2020 11:27 PM            

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A wonderful pOem, Randall!
I loves it!

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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posted June 10, 2020 09:12 AM            

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Originally posted by mirage29:
wow, omg .. well thank you very much

You do good poetry.
Even with your other works, you're very sensitive.

Linda would love it.

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Thinking Linda would love it makes me very happy.

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posted June 10, 2020 09:13 AM            

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Originally posted by ballerina:
A wonderful pOem, Randall!
I loves it!

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Thank you! I'm glad you do.

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posted June 17, 2020 05:00 PM            

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It was just a spur of the moment thing.

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posted June 17, 2020 05:39 PM            

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Inspiring

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posted June 23, 2020 04:50 PM            

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Thank you, Ayelet!

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posted August 23, 2020 05:25 PM            

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Working on another short one. The short ones are sometimes tougher to write!

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posted August 25, 2020 10:50 AM            

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Looking forward to it.

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posted October 04, 2020 05:20 PM            

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Still working on it!

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posted October 27, 2020 10:01 AM            

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I am still working on it.

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posted October 28, 2020 04:09 PM            

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^

You've got ESP!
I was going to *bump* this the day you did!

Even if it takes a long time,
let the sense of 'wanting' pull on the Muse from the background.

This IS a talent you have.
You do good work!

The Working of The Muse of Creative Inspiration
Listen to the story of 'how' Paul Simon was able to write this song. With the feedback and tweaking from friends and associates, they had humongous success.

(topic) The Story Of Bridge Over Troubled Water (Simon & Garfunkel)
[11:31] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8uZgcz_WlAA

To me, the song sounds like it comes from the voice of a Guardian Angel, talking to and comforting the person sitting there, during a moment he needs a sense of 'presence'-- not being alone.

(music) Bridge over Troubled Water (Simon & Garfunkel, from The Concert in Central Park)
[4:40] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WrcwRt6J32o

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