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posted December 06, 2020 06:14 PM            

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"How did you do it?"
she asked.
"Do what?"
I replied.
"Make me fall in love
with you."
I'm just me.
It's all I can be.
You're just you...
...
This poem has no ending.
Just.
Like.
Us.
...

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posted December 06, 2020 06:31 PM            

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Don't.End.

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posted December 06, 2020 07:56 PM            

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How terribly romantic. Yea, the best answer to why people genuinely fall in love.

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posted December 07, 2020 04:31 AM            

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Ahhh the mystery of love and attraction, skilfully condensed. I enjoyed this Randall

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posted December 07, 2020 01:43 PM            

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Maybe I just couldn't find something that rhymes with "you."

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posted December 08, 2020 01:04 PM            

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shoe
coup
view
loo
woo
poo
too
new
knew
sue
cue
flu
blue
pew
roo
moo
hew
coo (Scottish cow)
anew
zoo
boo
goo
do

Come on now Randall

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posted December 08, 2020 06:12 PM            

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🦉That can’t be true!

(I like the non-ending just fine, though.)

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posted December 09, 2020 03:00 AM            

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quote:

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Originally posted by Randall:
Maybe I just couldn't find something that rhymes with "you."

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Everything happens for a reason

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posted December 10, 2020 05:48 PM            

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It worked out me for that not having an ending became the perfect ending.

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posted December 18, 2020 10:13 AM            

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That's a really nice one, Randall.

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posted December 18, 2020 04:58 PM            

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Thank you, mirage.

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posted December 20, 2020 03:53 PM            

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quote:

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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Everything happens for a reason

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Indeed!

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