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Topic: may i share a poem?
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Bernadette1216 Knowflake Posts: 504 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted August 21, 2002 08:54 PM
i love poetry...i wrote this in November..Magick Carpet Ride where do your obsessions lie? so deep in the perils of your mind i have tried to seek you but i can't seem to reach you as you pull so far away from me now and i don't know just what to do for all i see is bleeding you right beneath your step you want yourself to help but that is fraud and you know why you can't break free, this love to buy another day, you waste away thinking of me, what did you say? i'm drawn to you, you can't explain then tell me this, as i move terrain to be with you, one minute still the time will linger, yes it will my love to bring, my heart to bear it's just so easy, yet unfair waiting, careful, watch your back she's coming after you in mourners black she digs her claws in, yes she does i'll fight for you, but realize that once i win, there's no goodbyes only hello's to brand new days and love explored in brand new ways move aside, you fearful soul i'll work my magick and then you'll know my love is higher, magick carpet ride Copyright Amanda Patton 111601 IP: Logged |
Enrique Knowflake Posts: 496 From: Mexico city, Mexico Registered: Mar 2002
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posted August 21, 2002 11:58 PM
Thanks for sharing the poem, it made me think a lot... and WELCOME! +BE FIGHT+ +BE LIGHT+ +BE REVOLUTION+ IP: Logged |
peace_keeper Knowflake Posts: 78 From: canada Registered: Jul 2002
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posted August 22, 2002 09:56 AM
Awsome poem Bernadette!! I give it two thumbs upPeace and Love to You and all the Knowflakes! IP: Logged |
Bernadette1216 Knowflake Posts: 504 From: Registered: Aug 2002
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posted August 22, 2002 10:01 AM
THANKS!!!IP: Logged |
sweetpeas Knowflake Posts: 924 From: Plainfield, IN Registered: Sep 2001
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posted August 22, 2002 05:51 PM
------------------ No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. -Aesop- IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 25287 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 03, 2002 10:13 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |