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Topic: poem written by my daughter?
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topshelf
Knowflake Posts: 46
From: OH
Registered: Jan 2009
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posted January 23, 2009 07:25 PM
 
hi all!my daughter is 11 and a Taurus. He chart has a water void. No planets or houses in water.
She is a Gem moon Sag rising.. She wrote a poem as an assignment... "The Sea"
The sea pulls me away from the world
It listens to me
It tells me I am one with it The sky sings while the sea dances
Back and forth Back and forth
The moon calms the sea
telling stories about the stars The sea is like a child
growing everyday
This is the sea
This is part of me. She got an A
Thought it interesting her choice of topic.. IP: Logged |
MyVirgoMask
Knowflake Posts: 2045
From: Florida for now
Registered: Sep 2008
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posted January 23, 2009 07:36 PM
I  it! Such a lovely, simple, but poignant poem.
She might not have planets / houses in water, but that doesn't mean she has no interest in those things...maybe it makes her more fascinated with those themes in general?IP: Logged |
LEXX
Moderator Posts: 2610
From: Still out looking for Schrödinger's cat.........& LEXIGRAMMING... is my Passion!
Registered: Jan 2008
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posted January 23, 2009 07:57 PM
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Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain. IP: Logged |
LEXX
Moderator Posts: 2610
From: Still out looking for Schrödinger's cat.........& LEXIGRAMMING... is my Passion!
Registered: Jan 2008
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posted January 23, 2009 07:59 PM
BTW....
 To LindaLand!
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topshelf
Knowflake Posts: 46
From: OH
Registered: Jan 2009
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posted January 23, 2009 08:41 PM
I was just very surprised at the words..
that she is part of the sea. She is very emotional.. but what 11 yr. old isn't LOL
She is way beyond her yrs.
I often joke that she is only 11 on paper.I have encouraged her to continue her writing. IP: Logged |
koiflower
Knowflake Posts: 2054
From: Australia
Registered: Jun 2008
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posted January 23, 2009 09:04 PM
Beautiful...!!! -She's in touch with her feelings. It can be hard for some 11 year olds to write their feelings down in an intrinsic manner. Usually, there is an element of concrete structure.But your daughter has used thought, feeling, and intuition to write a beautiful piece of work!! IP: Logged |
blue moon
Moderator Posts: 5345
From: U.K
Registered: Dec 2007
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posted January 25, 2009 05:33 PM
It's all about the Moon. Gemini Moon is very good at expressing feelings.Check out her draconic chart ~ it might suprise you. It might be full of water planets. Nice work. And may I say, what a refreshing thread topic for LL Central. IP: Logged |
topshelf
Knowflake Posts: 46
From: OH
Registered: Jan 2009
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posted January 25, 2009 08:54 PM
yes, it does. Sun/Merc Scorpio Mars Picses and ASC Cancer. Merc. in the 4th.What is a draconic chart? If you don't mind  IP: Logged |
Lindaland
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