posted November 19, 2008 03:26 PM
I am not posting this to point out errors.I like Yivy's style and images she portrayed.
I wanted to rewrite it to recreate it without errors to show how easy it is to find other words or phrases to replace added words and or misspelling.
My revisions are in bold
Her original is in normal font except for the bits I replced which are in bold thusly:
(BOLD)
THE UNICORN STORY
THIS IS THE TRUTH
ON THE UNICORN STORY
THIS ICON TIES INTO
THE NORTH SOUTH STORY
THIS IS THE TRUTH
ON THE UNICORN STORY.
THIS ICON TIES INTO
THE NORTH-SOUTH STORY.
SETH SENT IT TO US
ITS CURSE IS THE
SCORN OR HURT ON
HERSTORY TO SCORN
THE TRUTH
SETH SENT IT TO US -
ITS CURSE IS THE
SCORN OR HURT ON
HERSTORY...TO (SCORTH)
THE TRUTH!
IT'S CON IS TO SET
HISTORY TO RISE O'ER
HERS
ITS 'CON' IS TO SET
HISTORY TO RISE ('ORE)
HERS...
ITS OTHER CURSE IS
TO INSURE THE TRUE
HE HER UNIT IS IN
SUCH UNREST,
NO CURE
IS HIS, IS HERS.
ITS OTHER CURSE IS
TO INSURE THE TRUE
'HE-HER UNIT' IS IN
SUCH UN-REST, (THERE)
IS NO CURE.
ITS HOUSE IS IN
IONS....THEY "THE
UNICORNS" USE IONS
TO TURN THE
NORTH SOUTH TRUTH.
ITS HOUSE IS IN
IONS...THEY (THE
UNICORNS) USE IONS
TO (RE-SET) THE
NORTH-SOUTH TRUTH...
NORTH IS NOT O'ER
SOUTH...OR SOUTH
O'ER NORTH YET
THEY TURN IT
TO NOT RUN TRUE
NORTH IS NOT ('ORE)
SOUTH...OR SOUTH
('ORE) NORTH. YET
THEY {RE-SET) IT.
SETH, IN UNICORN
USE, SENT IT,
SET SIN IN IT TO
INSURE SIN NO SIN
IN HERSTORY...YET
IT IS IN HISTORY
SETH, IN UNICORN
USE, (RE-SET) IT TO
INSURE SIN. NO SIN
IN HERSTORY - YET
(IT'S) IN HISTORY..
THIS IS TRUTH HE IS
NORTH...SHE IS SOUTH
SINCE SETH TURN SET IONS
INTO SIN...ONE IS RISEN
O'ER THE OTHER
THIS IS TRUTH! HE IS
NORTH..SHE IS SOUTH.
SINCE SETH (RE-SET) IONS
INTO SIN...ONE IS RISEN
('ORE) THE OTHER.
THIS IS TRUTH NOT ONE
IS O'ER THE OTHER. THE
RISE O'ER THE OTHER IS
TO HURT THE UNIT
THIS IS TRUTH! NOT ONE
IS ('ORE) THE OTHER. THE
RISE ('ORE) THE OTHER IS
TO HURT THE UNIT.
TO SET THIS TURN CURSE
IN STONE, SETH SENT
UNICORNS UNTO US TO
CON US. TO SET US INTO
UNREST, NOT TRUTH !
TO SET THIS (RE-SET) CURSE
IN STONE, SETH SENT
UNICORNS UNTO US. TO
'CON' US. TO (CON-CERN)
US IN (UN-REST), NOT TRUTH!
THEY SOOTHE US INTO HE
OR SHE...NOT THE UNIT.
THEY INSURE SHE IS SO
SORRY..INSURE NO
NO INTENSE RISE IN HER
INSURE HE CURSE HER.
THEY (SOOTH) US INTO HE
OR SHE..NOT THE UNIT.
THEY INSURE SHE IS SO
SORRY..INSURE NO
(IN-TENSITY) IN HER.
INSURE HE CURSE HER.
THEY TOO INSURE HER
OTHER CURSE....HER
"SHE" CURSE
THEY TOO INSURE HER
OTHER CURSE...HER
(UTER-US) CURSE.
TO UNSET THIS RUSE
USE NO UNICORN ICON
TURN HERSTORY OR
HISTORY INTO
OUR STORY.
TO (RE-CON) THIS RUSE,
USE NO UNICORN ICON.
TURN HERSTORY OR
HISTORY INTO
OUR STORY...
YOU THE ICON
NOT THE UNICORN
USE YOU TO RETURN
THE IONS TO RUN TRUE
THEN YOU, US,
HE, SHE..
SURE TO RISE
YOU('RE) THE ICON..
NOT THE UNICORN.
USE YOU TO (RE-SET)
THE IONS..THEN
YOU('RE) SURE TO RISE!!
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