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Topic: WHERE IS MY LOVER FOR LIFE
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bleakbeauty
Knowflake Posts: 514
From: Australia
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted March 23, 2006 05:42 AM
 
Another lexi which is more like a poem I guess. Oh well, everyone has their own method of lexigramming. I actually lexigram to find answers to questions or vent emotions so it's therapeutic for me. I like sharing them on here, but forgive me that they are not as good as the one you guys do. I can't help not repeating certain words because I like it to make sense. I am always frustrated when I get stuck and can't finish the lexi so that is why it is so repetitive.WHERE IS MY LOVER FOR LIFE
HE IS OF FIRES
HE LIVES
HE WILL RISE
HIS LOVE IS SEVERE FOR ME
HE WILL FORM MY LIFE
HE WILL SEE HOW MY LOVE FLOWS
HE FOLLOWS MY SMILE
SIEVES MY MISERY
FEELS FOR ME SHOW ME WHO HE IS
SEER FOR ME SOMEWHERE HE LIES
HE LIVES FOR ME
LIFE FORMS HIM
HE IS VERY WISE
I FEEL HIM HERE
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freebird
Knowflake Posts: 817
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Registered: Jul 2005
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posted March 24, 2006 04:48 AM
hey beauty ! it was wonderful....IP: Logged |
LEXX
Moderator Posts: 1567
From: Still out looking for Schrödinger's cat.........& LEXIGRAMMING... is my Passion!
Registered: Jan 2008
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posted September 30, 2008 12:48 AM
Bumping this as it it one of the better Lexigrams I have come across, having only one small error, the extra "S" in the word sieveS.
Many here have far more than one.
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but forgive me that they are not as good as the one you guys do.
I think you did very well!
And you did not intentionally add or hide words or letters..as a many on the net do.
I have come across some that look very impressive until checked for errors and then they no longer impress. Anyone can add words and pad it trying to force it to say things not actually to be found.
Repetition is OK...you made your point.
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It is not about waiting for storms to pass...it is about learning to dance in the rain!
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 26532
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted October 16, 2008 02:18 PM
Very good!------------------
"Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz IP: Logged |
LEXX
Moderator Posts: 1567
From: Still out looking for Schrödinger's cat.........& LEXIGRAMMING... is my Passion!
Registered: Jan 2008
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posted October 16, 2008 02:30 PM
Yes it is! 
To make it totally error free this line:SIEVE(S) MY MISERY
could be changed to any of the following: HE WILL SIEVE MY MISERY
RELIEVES MY MISERY
HE RELIEVES ME OF MY MISERY
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It is not about waiting for storms to pass...it is about learning to dance in the rain!
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blue moon
Moderator Posts: 3838
From: U.K
Registered: Dec 2007
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posted October 29, 2008 05:02 PM
That's beautiful, and reminds me of the song "the Dancer" by P.J.Harvey somewhere in sentiment, somehow. 
He came riding fast like a phoenix out of fire flames
He came dressed in black with a cross bearing my name
He came bathed in light and the splendor and glory
I can't believe what the lord has finally sent me He said dance for me, fanciulla gentil
He said laugh a while, i can make your heart feel
He said fly with me, touch the face of the true god
And then cry with joy at the depth of my love Cause i've prayed days, i've prayed nights
For the lord just to send me home some sign
I've looked long, i've looked far
To bring peace to my black and empty heart My love will stay till the river bed run dry
And my love lasts long as the sunshine blue sky
I love him longer as each damn day goes
The man is gone and heaven only knows Cause i've cried days. i've cried nights
For the lord just to send me up some sign
Is he near? is he far?
Bring peace to my black and empty heart So long day. so long night
Good lord, be near me tonight
Is he near? is he far?
Bring peace to my black and empty heart
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