posted March 27, 2007 07:24 AM            

Rachel Kristen Cox

STEER TO THE NORTH STAR
ANOTHER STAR TO RISE IN THE EAST
ROAR AT IT LIKE A LION
WARN OTHERS

THE EARTH'S HEART IS TO HEAL
REST HERE IN HER LAIR 'NEATH THE STAR HOST AT THE SEA

A LONE HIKE TO STEER O'ER
SHE/HE EXCEL AT RISK

HEAR THE LOST EARTH NOTES
THE TONES WARN
NO ONE TO LISTEN?
LISTEN!

HEARTS TORE, HEARTS TEAR
HEAL
RISE
SEE THE REAL TRAIL TO COAST ON
SEX NITE RITES TO HEAL HEARTS
A STORK TO STEER NEAR HER
IS IT HERS, IS IT HIS?
IT IS NOT IN HASTE ... IT IS THEIR HEARTS HERE

posted October 28, 2012 01:54 AM            

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Originally posted by chosen?:
RACHEL KRISTEN COX
REAL
CHRIST
HEAL
HEAL CHRIST(?)
LISTEN TO CHRIST
LET CHRIST HEAL
RARE ROCK
ROCK ON KRISTEN

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Edit to add:
Eleanore's creation is almost an actual Lexigram;
except for the following 5 errors:
WARN (used twice) because it has a letter "W"
which Kristin's name does not have.
NEATH is pushing it, but it is a poeticism.
The same for O'ER.
NITE is not a real word, but slang.
LET'S (used twice) is a contraction for LET US;
and there is no letter "U" in Kristin's name.
This is a lovely piece of work
which could become an actual Lexigram
with just a few changes.
The use of the words WARN twice;
and LET'S twice;
add significant untrue meaning to the creation.
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The word NITE could simply be eliminated.
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This line:
THE TONES (W)ARN
could become;
HEAR THE TONES?
or;
THE TONES CAN HEAL
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eliminate this line:
(W)ARN OTHERS
or change to for example:
TEACH ETHICS TO OTHERS
or;
HEREON TEACH OTHERS
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These two lines
LET('S) HEAL EACH OTHER
LET('S) KNEEL TO THE EARTH, THE STAR
with the invalid contraction "LET'S" for LET (U)S
can be changed to:
LET SHE/HE HEAL EACH OTHER
LET SHE/HE KNEEL TO THE EARTH. THE STAR
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Some more words that could be used throughout:
RECREATE CREATION CREATORS CREATOR
HERO HEROES HEROINES HEROINE
ENCIRCLES ENCIRCLE EARTH RISE
CRESCENT SINCERE SILENT CLEANSE
NORTH EAST HEARTS HEART ETERNAL
CORRECT CORRECTS ETHICAL ETHICS
EROTICA EROTIC SCIENCE ECHOES ECHO
HARKENS HARKEN NOTICES NOTICE
ORACLES ORACLE LISTEN TEACH HEREON